One Short Of A Llama:Comments

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david akl-166-53.static.ihug.co.nz[203.29.166.53] Mozilla/4.07 [en] (X11; I; Linux 2.2.10 i586; Nav)
Re: haiku on Saturday 31st of July 12:37 AM, 1999 (david@osoal.org.nz)

first line should have five.
second line should have seven.
last line has five too.

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Opium p1-max13.wlg.ihug.co.nz[216.100.151.1] Mozilla/4.51 [en] (X11; I; Linux 2.2.5-15 i586)
Re: haiku on Monday 2nd of August 10:43 PM, 1999

yeah i got it right the last time :)
i read up on it :P

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Az firewall.netnet.net.nz[202.49.242.161] Mozilla/4.05 [en] (X11; I; Linux 2.0.34 i586)
Re: haiku on Sunday 1st of August 11:52 AM, 1999

To be a *proper* Haiku, the middle verse has got to have some reference to the seasons, so you all lose.
It's 'sposed to be death poetry anywho, not Beer Poetry :)

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david cow.osoal.lan[192.168.0.13] Mozilla/4.6 [en] (X11; I; Linux 2.2.10 i686)
Re: haiku on Sunday 1st of August 3:51 PM, 1999 (

david@osoal.org.nz

Shakesbeare p1-max7.wlg.ihug.co.nz[209.79.142.129] Mozilla/4.5 [en] (Win95; I)
Re: haiku on Saturday 31st of July 2:39 PM, 1999

Well make up ya mind!! does the last line have 5 or 2? :P

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